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#11 Post by **wdscharff** » Sat Sep 05, 2020 4:26 am

mxrd wrote: Sat Sep 05, 2020 4:23 am
it would have been perfect ot have a link for a quick look

Thanks, good idea!
I will add the link to the forum when I am back home

#12 Post by **jocester** » Sat Sep 05, 2020 6:41 am

Schöner Artikel, der Bewunderung und Respekt verlangt, deshalb
Chapeau!

#13 Post by **wdscharff** » Sat Sep 05, 2020 11:26 am

Done, all tips and suggestions (more or less well) implemented. Was a bit more time consuming than I thought. The next articles will be easier for me, I hope.

I'm still open for tips, suggestions for improvement and constructive criticism.

#14 Post by **wdscharff** » Mon Sep 07, 2020 4:18 am

"Sodele", as the Swabian says, my little introduction is ready.
The last article

https://web57.ws/site/linux/?post=2020-09-06

Comments, seeing mistakes somewhere, suggestions for improvement ?

#15 Post by **Kulmbacher** » Tue Sep 08, 2020 5:29 am

"sauba gschaftt" ~ "well done" ;-)

small correction?

"Was die Suchgeschwindigkeit betrifft ist ein Vergleich
Drill zu Catfish in etwa wie der zwischen einem
Dreizehenfaultier und einem Geparden."

Think Drill is the gepard ...

Servus

#16 Post by **wdscharff** » Tue Sep 08, 2020 5:39 am

Danke für den Hinweis
uups, ja, bei der Reihenfolge könnte man irritiert werden ... obwohl, warum sollte ich ein Dreizehenfaultier dem Geparden vorziehen?
Ich korrigier das mal schnell :-)

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